Ennui

The Than-bauk is a three-line poem, conventionally an epigram, each line being of four syllables, and the rhyme being on the fourth syllable of the first line, the third syllable of the second one, and the second of the third. This has been called "climbing rhyme" and is characteristic of Burmese verse.

The following is my poem in Than-bauk:

Ennui

When tears become
more the sum of
night, numb is love.

Thursday, December 9, 2010

“Devolutions” from In an Ocean of Grass

The following is a poem written in mester de clerecia, or cuaderna via (the way of the four,) a style of poetry used by 13th century intellectuals of Castile. This style of poetry consists of four-line stanzas of alexandrines. A conventional alexandrine consists of rhymed verses of six iambic feet. A more detailed research indicates that an alexandrine has seven iambic feet. To split the difference I chose to create a work with eight syllabic measures in the line prior to a caesura, followed with six syllables to the end the line. “Devolutions” was inspired by an earlier poem of mine, “In an Ocean of Grass I,” & “In an Ocean of Grass II.”

Devolutions

In a skiff tethered gently to tall reeds & leathered sedge,
below the glowing Ibis wing just rising from the hedge,
I’m watching twisted beams descend in rosy sheets
across a sky piled high in clouds & crowned in feathered pleats.

Rainbows are dissolving in the rising mist of distant shores
& twilight is evolving through a purple rain that pours
high above the canopy & seeping through the leaves,
piercing wide the panoply & sloughing off the eaves.

Whispers of a sighing breeze are dying near Cape Sable Bay
where a blushing sun sets low, kissing horizons away &
while sketching the loss of a small devolving Cypress tree,
I’ve captured instead fragments of latent fragility.

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